Friday, October 9, 2015

Personal Narrative rough draft



 Writer’s Workshop

Flutters of excitement rolled through my stomach like waves as we arrived at Olympic College. A crisp morning breeze surrounded my face, making my nose and cheeks become flushed with a red tint. My teacher, Ms. Martin, escorted me off the bus along with a few students from my school. It was hard to locate her among the sea of people, as she blended in due to her short height. The morning sunshine shone through the trees, looking as if a photographer should have been there to capture the moment. As I made my way to the auditorium, I pondered how I could be skilled enough in English to be recommended for this Writer's Workshop. I felt as if I had been invited to a VIP event, and in a sense I was. When the squeaky doors were pried open by the security guard, a rush of musty carpet smell rushed over me. It was like walking into a basement.

The auditorium was so dark that nobody could see where they were going. After aimlessly trying to find our seats for a good five minutes, the guard finally managed to locate the light switch. I quickly found an aisle seat and plopped down next to my teacher. Once everyone was seated, the speaker, Mr. Fulton, announced in a booming voice; “Ten minutes until we begin children”. It surprised me how such a funny looking man could be so intimidating. After chatting with my teacher about how bushy Mr. Fulton’s eyebrows were, the squeaky doors had been opened again, allowing fresh air to fill the auditorium once again. I didn’t recognize any of the faces that walked in, but judging by their age, I assumed they were from another elementary school in the area. My assumptions were confirmed when my teacher excitedly squealed; “Hello Ms. Pitcher!” Ms. Pitcher looked like a gorgeous Amazonian goddess to me. Her perfect curly hair, her long legs and beautiful smile made me instantly comfortable around her. Ms. Martins’ shorter legs made her look like a munchkin compared to Ms. Pitcher though.

After the process of opening the shrieking doors and more student’s flooding in repeated four more times, Mr. Fulton boomed “We are now ready to begin the lecture. Please quiet down and be respectful of the guests we have invited to speak to us today.” After the room fell silent, Mr. Fulton went on explaining why we were there. “You are all here as a privilege because your teachers see great potential in your work as a writer, not because you are the perfect writer already. Writer’s Workshop is a specialized field trip for grade school level students who are skilled in composing literature. Only 6 or 7 kids are chosen throughout the school to partake in a session lectured by a college professor, and 3 authors who describe how literature became an avenue for their career. Each person will be introduced on stage and asked questions throughout the lecture by the speaker, me. As this lecture continues, you will begin to understand how there is always room for improvement as a writer. You will be exposed to other people’s experiences that you may or may not relate to. The point of all this is to show you what you can achieve by refining your skills and pursuing literature.”


 Everything made so much more sense in that moment. I felt empowered to learn that my skills and enjoyment for writing lead me to an exclusive opportunity to explore other forms of literature. It was an organized setting that didn’t leave any room for error. I was lost in my own thought as Mr. Fulton introduced the first author. I was so proud of myself I couldn’t even concentrate on his loud obnoxious voice producing elaborate words. I began to wonder what would have happened had I not been given this opportunity. Would I still be inspired to write as vigorously as I had been before?

 I slowly came back into focus after pondering the “what ifs” for a good five minutes. The author was discussing how she believed that her love for writing began when she started reading novels more frequently. As she continued, I wondered if the same was true for me. I had always been good at reading and I enjoyed it… did it also make me a better writer? As I thought through the complex questions I asked myself, the answer became clear to me. Reading other’s works gave me insight to good writing.

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